Help me with my article please..?

Well, your premise is that living without technology can be blissful, right? In what ways? Financially - saving money on gadgets and the related hardware, software, upgrades, upkeep, use, and repair costs. Socially - returning to in-person social interaction (I saw a study that said that kids today - the ones raised on ipods, cell phones, hand-held computer devices, etc. - are something like 40% less empathetic than the previous generation). Physically - people would get out more and exercise, obesity rates would drop, people would get more sunlight, moods would improve, etc. Less interuptions - being able to drive in a car w/out having to answer a phone or respond to a text or accommodate someone else who does have to take a call/text. No more cyber bullying. Think of things like that...